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So I'm writing another book. And I'd first like some feedback on an audiences thoughts on the prologue. Prologue Dreams of Her               Shadows fill the room from the candle light. Her lips stained red with the victim’s bitter blood. The lust ran high on this night as a certain feeling of something special came along. She creeps backwards falling onto the bed, clearly prepared for what I wanted to give her. She lies back, relaxed to my half naked body crawling onto her immortal skin. I dip my head down to kiss her sweet lips, putting her completely under my spell. Wrapping her arms around me, she pulls me closer, forcing me to

Tainted Love  by Marilyn Manson Sometimes I feel I've got to? Run away, I've got to? get away from the pain you drive in the heart of me The love we share Seems to go nowhere, and I've lost my light, Now I toss and turn, I can't sleep at night, Once I've ran to you, (I ran) Now I run from you, This tainted love you given, I give you all a boy could give you, take my tears, and that's not nearly all, Tainted Love, Tainted love, Now I know I've got to? Run away, I've got to? Get away, Y' Don't really want anymore from me to make? Things right, Y' need someone? to hold you tight D'ja think L

Don't you forget about me? Please, don't forget about me. Because. Every little thing, reminds me of you. The things you did to help me grow strong, And the things me and you overcome. It makes me feel alive, through all the times we've cried. You truly are the miracle in our lives. Just the other week, I was walking down our street, I saw a little thing; it made me want to sing. This thing was so cute, reminded me of you. The way you looked, the way you touched, I just loved it so much. Cause. Every little thing, reminds me of you. The things you did to help me grow strong, And the things me and you overcome. It makes